Monday, October 8, 2012

Chasing The Rainbow Poetry Forms


Hyde Park Thursday Poets Rally Week 74 (October 4 -October 10)

II: Quintet

Such joy to build a fire of love within,
To burst to smoke, to touch the inner core,
Not thinking of gain or hunger of spring rain,
and comprehension adds coal to existing charmin,
What unsinkable rages of being in Satan's Law.

III. Couplet

To whom it cares, let's respect our differences,
For if we don't, sameness ruins wholesome choices.


Rachel Collegewood Schapiro said...

excellent way to learn poetry and inspirations.

Alissa Daimakepeace Schapiro said...

truth words.

Carolina Walker Myers said...

agree, you rock!

Sheridan Newsomie Raun said...

exceptional poetry and forms,

divine message.

Bradley Peraino said...

Thank you for adding to the Benefit Collection.

Aya Gugles Wilson said...

I love it.

Iris Huswiferyman Murphy said...

eloquent words.

Elizena said...

Very good piece and you did a wonderful job in bringing your emotions and thoughts over and into the reader's mind. Job well done and thanks so much for sharing! Have a blessed day.

Anonymous said...

good job. here's my rally..

Lexi Woods said...


Sayantini Bhattacharya said...

I loved it. Strong and significant enough.

Please check my post for Thursday Poets Rally at
A Mother's Promise

Bing Yap said...

this is a lovely piece!